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October 23rd, 2015, 9:30 am

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moonjellybeans, October 23rd, 2015, 4:01 am     Reply


Magnus still looks nervous, despite his insisting that he's okay. Then again, he always tends to look pretty nervous.

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The_Time_Hunter, October 23rd, 2015, 12:43 pm     Reply


Micaela, you're not that nice if you're asking him to scale down a building haha.

Arianwen (Guest), October 25th, 2015, 8:27 pm     Reply


Point of order. What's the bed tied to?

moonjellybeans, October 28th, 2015, 12:50 am     Reply


@Arianwen: Currently, nothing, though Micaela is going to help counter-balancing his weight.

Pthedmund (Guest), October 28th, 2015, 12:31 pm     Reply

Haha
@Arianwen: sheer apprehension and the hopes Magnus weighs as lightly as he looks. heh

Zanar_Naryon, July 26th, 2017, 5:46 pm     Reply


Not that I complain or anything (I really hate leaving constructive criticism, it always sounds like I'm complaining), but having Magnus say simple words in Norwegian is a bit weird. I imagine it'd be more realistic if he swore (like he does) or reacted instinctively in Norwegian.

moonjellybeans, July 26th, 2017, 5:51 pm     Reply


@Zanar_Naryon: No, no, don't ever feel bad about that!

That's a good point, I might just keep it to the cursing in future pages~

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