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August 7th, 2015, 9:30 am

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moonjellybeans, August 7th, 2015, 1:50 am     Reply

I mean, that's fair right?

That glowing bug was definitely out of the ordinary. I get the feeling that Micaela wouldn't normally share something like this to just anyone.

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Guest, August 7th, 2015, 8:27 pm     Reply


Though she wouldn't normally, I am so glad she did. So often the character refuses to explain a freakout until so much later in the story, and it causes undue drama. Drama is great, but I prefer it to be caused by characters who aren't arbitrarily playing dumb.

Thank you for not resorting to that writing trick.

moonjellybeans, August 10th, 2015, 2:05 am     Reply


@Guest: I'm glad you feel that way, because that is exactly why I had them talk instead of her brushing him off.

You don't get away with pointing a weapon at someone (twice) and not have to explain yourself.

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